PACK AUDITIONS[closed]

[Rivaxorus]

Hello there, this is one of your lovely admin's Riv. As you can see Foreign Spirit is brand new in the world of Carvanna. Meaning, we need packs. Two packs will be chosen to be created when you sign up, new members can col-lab if you want just like me and my co-admin did as we own Erebus. Just fill out this form and post it and we'll see how it goes. You can decorate the form with a table, or anything else to make it look appealing.

Form

Pack name:

Alliance: Evil, good, neutral

Native: yes or no?

Pack mentality/Goal:

Ranks:

Other:

[Capricorn♑]

Pack name:
Sensuret

Alliance:
Neutral

Native:
Yes- they've been around for a very long time.

Pack mentality/Goal:
Sensuret, as a whole, is a neutral pack, but they always pick a side. In their own pack, in wars between other packs, they always pick a side. They are also very war-like, with a death or glory attitude, although they are in no way evil or jerkfaces as a whole. They are simply organized, military, and violence is an answer for them at times. They want their pack to be an empire, and therefore, they conquer land- further proving their warlike attitude.

In no way do these wolves wish to kill things, or murderous. Perhaps some of their members are, but as a whole, they are not. They do as they must, as they are ordered. However, they question orders. They aren't completely obedient, they think for themselves. If someone told them to single handedly destroy a sloke using their teeth, they'd have the sense and defiance not to do it. Sensuret pack members are also born strategists, and are surprisingly clever- at least, most of the time. They are stereotyped as being very serious and organization freaks.

Ranks:

Alpha:
Symbol: ♈
The alpha is the leader. For many years, Sensuret was led by an immortal wolf who said she was a goddess, and indeed, she disappeared when the other gods did- perhaps to further prove her claim, perhaps her claim of being a goddess was real. Another wolf is currently taking her place.

General:
Symbol: ♈
The general is the second in command of Sensuret, and is the closest advisor to the alpha. They are a strong military leader, and demand respect, although not as much as the alpha.

Horus:
Symbol: ♈
The Alpha's mate. Has no real power.

Heru:
Symbol: ♈
The mate of the general, and children of both the general and alpha. Have no real power.

Captains:
Symbol: ♊
Are the high military leaders under the general. Lead groups of two sergeants and their wolves.

Sergeants:
Symbol: ♊
Lead small groups of wolves. Issue individual commands to wolves, and report to their captains.

Stoneworkers:
Symbol: ♋
Mainly earth wolves, perhaps with a few hybrid element or fire wolves. They create stone and metal structures for the pack, but mainly improve the main den.

Smiths:
Symbol: ♋
The earth wolves, and sometimes fire wolves, who make weapons and armor for the pack.

Footsoldiers:
Symbol: ♐
The main body of the pack, they are the fighting force, and the backbone.

Battlemedics:
Symbol: ♐
They are the wolves capable of healing wounds, mainly water wolves who can wash and close wounds easily. They are mainly used on the battlefield, but serve as healers for stuff like scrapes and illnesses, too.

Scouts:
Symbol: ♐
As their name suggests, they scout out stuff, but they are also hunters. They can fight on the battlefield or gather information about an enemy while at war. However, their main use is hunting.

Apprentices:
Symbol: ♐
The older pups and young teenagers, who are generally sheltered in battle, but are allowed to fight. They are from seven months to two years old, before becoming footsoldiers.

Trainees:
Symbol: ♐
The rank a wolf starts out in, from birth to seven months old. These pups are constantly trained almost all day and night to be good soldiers, intelligent, and know their place. Once a wolf hits a month old, they usually get only an hour of sleep each day, and learn stuff in shifts. They are taught by anyone with enough spare time.

Servants:
Symbol: ♓
The wolves who bring water to wolves, clean the main dens, or start controlled fires, that stuff. Generally, they're deformed (not crippled) wolves, or wolves who have been disgraced by a crime at least as serious as murder. Cannot earn a normal place.

Omegas:
Symbol: ♓
The disgraced members of a pack, generally gaining this rank through cowardice or crimes. They can earn their way back in the footsoldier or scout rank, eventually.

Other:
•'Symbols' are marked on a wolf's shoulder.
•Deaf wolves are given a swift and painless death as soon as their condition is discovered, due to being usually unable to take commands.
•The symbols represent 'classes'.
•♈ symbol= higher class.
•♊ symbol= minor leader class.
•♋ symbol= domestic class.
•♐ symbol= soldier/common class.
•♓ symbol= disgraced class.

[Rivaxorus]

Approved Sensuret is our second pack.

[Star]

Pack name: Alanera

Alliance: Neutral

Native: No, this is a very new pack that have migrated to Carvanna

Pack mentality/Goal: Alanera's goal is to accomplish peace within the pack. This pack believes that everything that happens happens for a reason somehow. Alanera are a very hardy pack as well though.

Ranks:

Kala: The most highest position in the pack the pack makes, the rules and accepts or exiles anyone in and out of the pack. What the Kala says goes if you beg to differ then you'll receive a punishment.

Jura: The Kala's mate and has the same privileges as the Kala. She, can accept or deny members s well as exile them.

Luina: Luina are the healers in the pack but their is really only one Luina and the Luina can choose to have an apprentice or not. The Luina heals those hurt in war and helps females give birth to young. They are Hightly respect after the Kala and Jura.

Makalira: Makaliras are warriors that protect the pack, they go into war when needed and if asked by the Kala even assassinate wolves. These wolves are usually, strong and fit wolves. They are highly respected though nost as much as the Kala and Jura.

Maura: Mauras are wolves who babysit pups, they are usually females, though they are males who have the position too.

Lulas: Lulas are young wolves who have not been given a rank and are too young to fend for themselves, they are usually taken care of by Mauras.

Comula: Comulas are elite hunters, they gunt for the pack and are usually the last to eat after the higher positions.

Trainees: Trainees are teenage wolves who are being trained for some position whether it be Comula, Maura anything they are being trained.

Purale: Purale's are the most lowest wolves they are not respected very much and they must be submissive to wolves higher than they are, and they must be submissive to the pups even.

Waq: Waqs are guards that protect the pack they make sure that no outsiders invade the territory.

Other: If a wolf bears weak young, with deformities the pups are often killed.

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[freakshow]

S A N G U E - R A I D E R S

-You can’t spell S L A U G H T E R without the L-A-U-G-H-T-E-R

ALPHA'S CHARACTER APPLICATION

THE BIO: Warren
BIRTH SEASON: Winter

THE AUDITION: What a wonderful mess, the brute couldn't believe where he'd ended up, such a barren land, so empty, and hot, and silent. Silent? "Why so quiet?" he whispered under a panting breath. "Why so dead?" he continued. Why so alone he thought dragging his paws over the dusty ground. Have the gods forgotten you as well?

[/i] he thought only speaking to the barren land he'd found. The brute froze, in his tracks, his body invisible on his dusty, dry, and basically dead paradise. He disappeared in the dust clouds, as the wind swept by. "Your gods...They've betrayed you, huh?" he muttered under his breath. "Forgotten you. A memory doomed to the past, thrown to the back of the mind, and never called upon again." he muttered, looking his paws on the cracked, dry ground.

"Yes, I know. I know that feeling...We've both been betrayed and forgotten. No matter how valiantly we've served those who watch over us. They care not" he said as he began to move again. You needen't worry now... a voice whispered. The brute looked up, and around, he could find nothing, scent, nor body. "Who is there?" he barked. You are among friends... the voice said. "Friends?" he inquired. Yes, friends. You are among the forgotten, the barren lands the humans long have forsaken.[/b] it explained. "Am I?" Fenris lifted his head and look a look around, barren brown hills of dry dead grasses, fallen dried logs, brittle and crumbly to the touch. A gathering of high rocks, Roasting in the sun to the north; a beyond destroyed wooden barrier. He looked to the west where a cave seem to form from mounds of fallen trees,and structured by boulders, there were multiple entrances to it, and within seemed like it'd be safe and structured enough to support many others.

You see my beauty, no? the voice rang as clouds, plump, and fat began to move in with the north east blowing winds. "Yes, this palce just needs someone to care for it" he barked. I have so much to offer, so much more to give, but I was too lost to the past fair traveler.[/color] the voice murmmered. The wind shifted, bringing another scent, this one was familiar, and appriciated. Fenris broke into a sprint, "WATER!" he howled in delight. Blue, out of all the brown, and dirt tones, came blue as a lively stream came into view. He lapped at the life giving water, now recharged, as shade rolled in from the angry gray clouds that loomed overhead. They rummbled angrily, but he stood fast. "You will not frighten me away!" he barked sternly. It is here i will start anew, I've decided.[/i] he thought. Lightning flashed and thunder roared calling the rains to drench him, drench the land, turn it mush, and mud.

Fenris stomped his paw. This land and I are one, we share the pain of being betrayed, anbanddoned, forgotten. "Worry no more, for I shall care for you now. This is my home, this is where I shall begin anew." the brute barked. He ran, paws pounding through the mud, and his senses guiding him through the blinding, drenching rain. He found the place where he would make his dens, and climbed atop the slippery rocks and braved the crumbling trees until he reached the absolute peak. There he gathered his paws under his body, and raised his head to the menacing skies. Releasing a howl unlike any beast could muster. In the face of this horrifying storm he took his claim of this forgotten land. "I am Fenris! I claim this forgotten landscape in the name of the Sangue Raiders!" he howled with determination in his eyes. Lowering his head from his proclaimation he grinned with fierece determination "May the world tremble at our might!" he growled.[/size] [Off of another site]

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THE PACK

NATIVE: Warren is a native of Carvanna, but his pack needn't be.

ALLIANCE: Neutral Evil

PACK DESCRIPTION: A Tough; hardened group of hardcore canines that seek control of all operations of Carvanna. They are a tight-knit group, and all hold respect for all in the group (Much like a brotherhood). They focus on mainly being assassins for hire; in other words carrying out others dirty-work, much like mercenaries. Which will in turn have others in their debt, and will give little chance to pay such debts back.

RANKS:

• Alpha*- - Leiter: Lead Rank of the Raiders. This canine divides out missions, and has absolute authority over the whole of the pack. The Leiter will attened the birth of ALL pups, and give his blessing. He decides punishments/rewards. This rank can only, EVER be held by a male.
  
  * - - Dirne: Females that the Leiter has taken a liking to especially in a sexual way. They are generally treated better than most other females of the Raiders. To other males of the pack, these are otherwise known as "untouchables" as they are forbidden to be mated to anyone other than the Leiter.
  
  
• Beta*- - General of War: Advises the Leiter on matters of offense, and defense. This canine is more than likely a male, but can be a female. It is respected highly by all Raiders.
  
  
• Gamma*- - Oberst: Trainee of the General; takes command when both the General and Leiter are away. Keep account of mission, and reports to the Leiter for documentaion.
  
  
• Elders*- - Holunder: These members have no true place within the Raiders, but are kept around for their experience. They are very few in number, and hold little respect because of their disability to work.
  
  
• Warriors* - - Kreiger: These members aerve as muscle to protect the Raider's homeland, and their hoard. They serve under the command of the General.
  
  
• Assassins* - - Morder: Females of this rank are refered to as Morderin. This rank is respected highly by all, even the Leiter. They carry out the missions unfit for the lower ranks.
  
  
• Theives* - - Neophyte: This is a coveted amongst the Raiders. It makes up a majority of their numbers. these members carry out missions the assassins do not. It is a respected rank.
  
  
• Medic* - - Schamane: A healer of sorts that specializes in the use of herbs, and plats to treat wounds, and other health issues.
  
  
• Pups* - - Welp: Young of the pack, that are too young to be trained.
  
  
• Trainees* - - Leherling: Adolesent canines that are going through placement training.
  
  
• pack* - - Raiders: Normal members of the pack. They are assigned very minor missions like retrieving food, and checking in on clients. They also maintain the packland
  
  
• Slaves* - - Sklavin: Slaves of the Raiders, and POWs. These are otherwise Omegas, and are looked down upon by everyone, even pups are taught to do so. Males are kept for bargaining, or otherwise 'disposed' of if they are useless. Females are kept as breeding tools until they have served their usefulness, or are otherwise freed (Bought or Negotiated freedom)
  

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TERMS: Within the Raiders everyone is a 'Comrade' or 'Brother/Sister' until you rach the slave rank, in which they may ONLY be called by their rank and are not considered family. The Leiter is referred to as his rank or 'Father', the only 'Mother' will be an elder or female with rank that is collectively well liked. ((Example: Father Warren. Comrade/Sister Ardlisa. Comrade/Brother Sinis. Mother Isiwa.))

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THE CREATOR

ALIAS: Freakshow
PRESENCE: I will try to be here everyday, checking in, and monitoring the site, I have Warren.

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((Note: This pack was intened for use elsewhere, but I never did so, the table does not belong/created by me, but its contents do. It was modified to meet the audition standards of this particular competition. I will remove it, and redo my audition if I have to. Please PM me with any concerns.))

- Freakshow

[Rivaxorus]

FREAK'S PACK HAS BEEN ACCEPTED. Star, your character your making for Erebus will be accepted as the Caliph or "beta". Your free to try again for a pack next time. Freak I will pm you the map description ^^

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